Untitled: by Fidel

In the park, I play soccer with my dad. The park is big; it’s like huge. It has somewhere to play slides, swings and more fun things to play with. The park is in Smithfield. It’s near my school.

My sister likes playing there. Her friends play there too. They love it. The last two months I went to the park for a week, 7 days. I like it.

I like the park. You should go there to play and have a lot of fun.

 

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