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Detail To Detail
By Alexandrina, Year 5
I feel the gentle breeze in my face
as I go through the life’s incredible maze
I feel lost but the minor details are there to help
the wind blows the leaves in the right direction
just like how currents in the water push green kelp
These little Details can go so far
so fast past the moon of mars
these little details, its true
Each little individual one
are actually so big, as big as the sun
Details like yellow speckles the sky
called stars
and the fast speedy vehicles that go past
called cars
now pay attention to every detail
anywhere and everywhere
There they’re alright, they’re just as small as a koala’s nail
It may seem true that it can be boring
but to me they’re interesting, just stop ignoring
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