Detail To Detail

By Alexandrina, Year 5

Written as part of Factory Feedback

I feel the gentle breeze in my face

as I go through the life’s incredible maze

I feel lost but the minor details are there to help

the wind blows the leaves in the right direction

just like how currents in the water push green kelp


These little Details can go so far

so fast past the moon of mars


these little details, its true

Each little individual one

are actually so big, as big as the sun


Details like yellow speckles the sky

called stars

and the fast speedy vehicles that go past

called cars


now pay attention to every detail

anywhere and everywhere

There they’re alright, they’re  just as small as a koala’s nail

It may seem true that it can be boring

but to me they’re interesting, just stop ignoring

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