My Birthday by Jaymi

By Jaymi, Year 6

Written as part of Factory Feedback

I sit at the table, as it was my birthday,

What a day to be happy, hip hip hooray.

I see the beautiful cake,

I could not wait to take a bite,

I watched one of the adults begin the candle’s light.

Everyone gathered around and began to sing to me,

I looked at everyone and smiled with glee. 

I couldn’t believe that the year had gone so fast,

and I was so excited to see another birthday pass.

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