My Birthday by Jaymi
By Jaymi, Year 6
I sit at the table, as it was my birthday,
What a day to be happy, hip hip hooray.
I see the beautiful cake,
I could not wait to take a bite,
I watched one of the adults begin the candle’s light.
Everyone gathered around and began to sing to me,
I looked at everyone and smiled with glee.
I couldn’t believe that the year had gone so fast,
and I was so excited to see another birthday pass.
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