My home is the sun by Natalie

By Natalie, Year 6

Written as part of Factory Feedback

Hello my name is Tracy. If you would like to know where I was born it would be in the sky. No joke, my mother was an astronaut. She was pregnant and she still needed the money so she kept her job even though she was pregnant to have me. So one year later she was in the sky and and she didn’t know she was giving birth yet then she had me in the sun it was the closest place to get to even tho it was hot they had the right outfit to go in there so she gave birth since the rocket was way to far then they arrived in the sun then then she gave birth to me and gave the oxygen to her to birth then she floated away and passed away. She sacrificed herself for me when I was a baby. When I was a baby in her mother’s big astronaut save uniform I stayed on the moon because the other astronaut lost me so I ended up living in the sun. How I survived was that my skin and body is special. It can beat over the sun and have a great life there with the moon and the stars and the others at the end.

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