The Curse on the Girl by Natalie

By Natalie, Year 6

Written as part of Factory Feedback

Once there lived a girl whose parents were ghosts. Nobody else weren’t able to see her parents beside her. This girl is named Marghosta. She is half ghost half human so she can see ghosts and humans and humans can see her but not the others because they are not half human. So she lived in a haunted house with her family which people will think she’s a lunatic and she spoke to herself until the police came and knocked on the door.

 They said can we talk to you parents then Marghosta said um maybe not right now since they are in the bathroom the police officer said do u mind letting your parents know that Kids about your age should be at school then Marghosta said what is school?.. Then he laughed out loud and said a good joke but seriously what is school so you are saying you don’t go to school and you don’t know school. Marghosta said um well yep anyway he had to have a talk with your parents about this. Um but they are very busy. 

She lied so the police wouldn’t see her alone technically not but then the police radio that was hung on his belt, then another guy said through the radio police Jack jack. We had an emergency, then the police officer left, then Marghosta was relieved, then she had no choice but to sign up for school, then she kinda fit in with the other kids at that school. But till a few years later she became the most popular magic girl like a good witch vampire ghost then she lived happily ever after.

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