The Annoying Friend by Mina

By Mina, Year 4

Written as part of Factory Feedback

One day there was a girl called  Riley in school. She always gets mad for everything and acts like a popular rude girl at school. She always kind of lies when you are  telling her to not say a secret to anyone and she always says the secret that you told her.

One day she was acting really weird in the morning, then in the afternoon she was mad and annoyed. Then she met a girl named Jessica, she always would make her sad and make her stomach hurt.

Then we had a two week school holiday. Jessica was always thinking in these two weeks that she will not be Riley‘s friend because she was lying about some stuff too. But then she stopped thinking and said “she might even be lying to me and if she doesn’t want to be my friend, I don’t care because it is her fault that she didn’t want to be my friend. I was already really kind to her and she was always rude to me.”

But she still doesn’t know if she wants her as a friend or not but now she is much more stronger and brave enough to do anything now.

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