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Keltis’s Story and the Free Spirits
By Lusiane, Year 8
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Keltis sat there quietly and miserably.
Though she was silent she was screaming
but you didn’t care enough to listen
her cries linger through my ear still
I should’ve listened to her cries
I saw she was in pain but I just sat and stared
As if I had been paralysed….
I stared at her cries as they wisped in the air
Her back lashed and her eyes watery
A young gloomy mist filled the air
intoxicating those around
making them realise the things that happen
making them see what a in need spirit looks like
The young ones were shook when they saw her no longer courageous spirit leave her
all to young to be knowing about these things
but they didn’t cover their eyes
they stared and cried
and so did Keltis
because they finally saw her pain
Keltis sat their watching her old spirit leave
She was dead
saying a goodbye with many tears of agony
Dead on that field people stood and looked
and she looked back
except they couldn’t see her ghost
she was free
she was a new person and she knew that
she had a burden free back
and she didn’t shed a tear anymore
not for anyone or anything
Keltis had made them finally hear her story
she was a free spirit she roamed around
cursing those who made anyone feel like she had felt
Torn to the core her sister shed tears
she whined till the next blood moon
forever remembering Keltis… she cried
she saw Keltis’s spirit that night
she was gutted and cowered away for a long period of time
she cowered because she knew that she could’ve done more
Keltis had a sad story and no one cared
no one wanted to listen to it
I was the only one who saw the whole thing
I saw Keltis get sad, abused, neglected, infuriated, lost, manipulated…
I saw it all
but I couldn’t help
Because I too was a lost spirit
and so we were spirits together
To freeing our spirits…. Listen and look
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